rhetorical devices day 4 active vs passive voice

Coming up: vocabulary quiz on rhetorical terms on Wednesday, April 18.(class handout / another copy below); 
In class: practice identifying rhetorical devices; introduction and practice with active vs passive voice.

Part 1: Identify the rhetorical device –logos, ethos or pathos- employed in the following examples and explain how they are used.

1.       “Doctors all over the world recommend this type of treatment.”

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2.      Yes, this car is more expensive, but don't you want your family to be safe?

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3.      “My endless volunteering resume, years of experience interacting and assisting the people of this community, and efficient cooperation skills work to build me up as the most appropriate candidate for mayor.”

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4.      "Based on the dozens of archaeological expeditions I’ve made all over the world, I am confident that those potsherds are Mesopotamian in origin."

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5.       "The algorithms have been run in a thousand different ways, and the math continues to check out."

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6.      "You’ll make the right decision because you have something that not many people do: you have heart."

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7.      "In 25 years of driving the same route, I haven’t seen a single deer."

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8.      "You will never be satisfied in life if you don’t seize this opportunity. Do you want to live the rest of your years yearning to know what would have happened if you just jumped when you had the chance?"

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Active Voice Versus Passive Voice

What Is Active Voice?

I'll start with active voice because it's simpler. In an active sentence, the subject is doing the action. A straightforward example is the sentence "Steve loves Amy." Steve is the subject, and he is doing the action: he loves Amy, the object of the sentence.

Another example is the title of the Marvin Gaye song “I Heard It through the Grapevine.” "I" is the subject, the one who is doing the action. "I" is hearing "it," the object of the sentence.

What Is Passive Voice?

In passive voice, the target of the action gets promoted to the subject position. Instead of saying, "Steve loves Amy," I would say, "Amy is loved by Steve." The subject of the sentence becomes Amy, but she isn't doing anything. Rather, she is just the recipient of Steve's love. The focus of the sentence has changed from Steve to Amy.

Active vs. passive voice. In a sentence written in the active voice, the subject of sentence performs the action. In a sentence written in the passive voice the subject receives the action.

To know whether you are writing in the active or passive voice, identify the subject of the sentence and decide whether the subject is doing the action or being acted upon. Passive Voice: the subject is the receiver of the action.

Samples: 

Active vs. passive voice

In a sentence written in the active voice, the subject of sentence performs the action. In a sentence written in the passive voice the subject receives the action.

Active: The candidate believes that Congress must place a ceiling on the budget.

Passive: It is believed by the candidate that a ceiling must be placed on the budget by Congress.

Active: Researchers earlier showed that high stress can cause heart attacks.

Passive: It was earlier demonstrated that heart attacks can be caused by high stress.

Active: The dog bit the man.

Passive: The man was bitten by the dog.

When to use passive voice

There are sometimes good reasons to use the passive voice.

To emphasize the action rather than the actor

After long debate, the proposal was endorsed by the long-range planning committee.

To keep the subject and focus consistent throughout a passage

The data processing department recently presented what proved to be a controversial proposal to expand its staff. After long debate, the proposal was endorsed by . . . .

To be tactful by not naming the actor

The procedures were somehow misinterpreted.

To describe a condition in which the actor is unknown or unimportant

Every year, thousands of people are diagnosed as having cancer.

To create an authoritative tone

Visitors are not allowed after 9:00 p.m.

Your turn: class handout / copy below

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Passive to active voice    Directions: Change each passive voice sentence into the active voice. Note you may need to adjust the form of the verb.

1.            The rock star was constantly chased by photographers.
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2.              Our vehicle had been stolen from our garage by the same burglary team.
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3.             Melissa was taken to Disney World by the people in the office.

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4.             All of the data on the hard drive was erased by the careless blogger.
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5.             All Siamese cats are held by the SPCA for four days.
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6.            Allison was stunned by the actions of her classmates.

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7.            A good insurance plan can now be gotten by all drivers.

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8.             An election was held by the township to determine the boundaries

of all districts

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9.             A full tuition scholarship is presented to the winner each year by the judges.

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10.        A good deal of money will be made by that investment.

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   11.  The television was purchased by a young man as a Father's Day gift. 

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12.  A colorful blanket for the new baby was knitted by a family friend.

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13.  Three finalists will be given prizes by the film festival judges tonight.

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14.  Peter Rabbit has been told by his mother not to play in Mr. McGregor's garden. 

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15. The mittens were lost by the three little kittens. 

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16.  Sally and I were treated to an old blues tune by the pianist while we ate. 

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17.  The man was rescued by a mysterious woman in a cape.

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18.  Ella complains that she is always given a million excuses by her daughter.

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19.  In this picture, my brother is being given a violin lesson by our cousin, Jessica.

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20.  When the bread arrived, it was gobbled down by the hungry guests. 

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Device                                   Definition

1.      anaphora             the repetition of a word or phrase at the beginning of successive clauses

2.      epistrophe         the repetition of a word at the end of each phrase or clause: “I swear to tell the truth, the whole truth, and nothing but the truth.”

3.      analogy                 the comparison of two pairs that have the same relationship. The key is to ascertain the relationship between the first so you can choose the correct second pair. Part to whole, opposites, results of are types of relationships you should find

4.      apostrophe    interruption of thought to directly address a person or a personification: “So, I ask you, dear reader, what would you have me do?”

5.      * imagery                 language that evokes one or all of the five senses: seeing, hearing, tasting, smelling, touching

6.        counterpoints   contrasting ideas such as black/white, darkness/light, good/bad

7.       * hyperbole          exaggeration or overstatement

8.       irony   an expression, often humorous or sarcastic, that exposes perversity or absurdity

Aristotelian Appeals

9.   logos  appeals to the head using logic, numbers, explanations, and facts. Through Logos, a writer aims at a person's intellect. The idea is that if you are logical, you will understand

10.    ethos  appeals to the conscience, ethics, morals, standards, values, principles