Sunday, November 5, 2017

Monday, November 6 graphic organizer time


Your projects from last Friday were the last grade of this quarter. With the exception of the two dramatic performances left in third period, all projects are worth only 50 points at this point.  If you have a performance, please send along as a clip or give me the you tube link.  I will accept any late material for 50 points until this Thursday, when grades close at 3  pm. Nothing will be accepted after that time. If you have a legal absence from last Friday- it will be posted in attendance- you have ten days to get the work in. That will bring it to next Monday.

Projects: OUTSTANDING WORK!

Coming up: graphic organizer; vocabulary quiz on Wednesday, November 15...handed out last week; another copy below
On Tuesday / Wednesday and Thursday this week you will be writing an essay response to "My Last Duchess."  Third period will be working with the Chromebooks in class, whilst periods six and nine will be in the library.  The essay is due at the end of the day on Thursday. Plan accordingly. You may work on this at home. Details will be posted on tomorrow's blog. Make sure you bring your annotated copy of the poem with you. 

For tomorrow: 6th and 9th periods should go directly to the library Tuesday, Wednesday and Thursday. Select a computer and sign on.
On the end of today's blog is the writing assignment for those who wish to get ahead. There is a class handout. Copy below.


In class: 

Your "My Last Duchess" graphic organizers are due at the close of class today. Please plan accordingly. Another copy below. Remember that you do not need to do page 1, as we did not review that material in class. This is your first grade for the second quarter.  

I
My Last Duchess” by Robert Browning  vocabulary. Quiz on Wednesday, November 15

1.    countenance (noun)- a person’s face or facial expression
2.    mantle (noun)- a loose sleeveless cloak or shawl, worn especially by women.
3.    bough (noun)- a main branch of a tree.
4.    trifling (noun or adjective)- unimportant or trivial.
5.    officious (adjective)- assertive of authority in an annoyingly domineering way, especially with regard to petty or trivial matters.
6.    munificence (noun)- the quality or action of being lavishly generous; great generosity.
7.    dowry (noun)- the money, goods, or estate that a woman brings to her husband in marriage
8.    to avow (verb)- to declare or state (something) in an open and public way
9.    dramatic monologue- (noun) -a literary work (as a poem) in which a speaker's character is revealed in a monologue usually addressed to a second person

10.         earnest-(adjective)- a serious and intent mental state

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My Last Duchess  by Robert Browning
 Duchess (n.) – the wife or widow of a duke (the male ruler of a duchy; the sovereign of a small
state)
 Frà (n.) – a title given to an Italian monk or friar (a Catholic man who has withdrawn from the
world for religious reasons)

THAT’S my last Duchess painted on the wall,      
Looking as if she were alive. I call             
That piece a wonder, now: Frà Pandolf’s hands
Worked busily a day, and there she stands.        
Will’t please you sit and look at her? I said                    5
“Frà Pandolf” by design, for never read
Strangers like you that pictured countenance,   
The depth and passion of its earnest glance,      
But to myself they turned (since none puts by  
The curtain I have drawn for you, but I)         10
And seemed as they would ask me, if they durst,            
How such a glance came there; so, not the first
Are you to turn and ask thus. Sir, ’twas not         
Her husband’s presence only, called that spot   
Of joy into the Duchess’ cheek: perhaps                       15
Frà Pandolf chanced to say, “Her mantle laps     
Over my lady’s wrist too much,” or “Paint            
Must never hope to reproduce the faint              
Half-flush that dies along her throat:” such stuff               
Was courtesy, she thought, and cause enough          20
For calling up that spot of joy. She had  
A heart—how shall I say?—too soon made glad.              
Too easily impressed: she liked whate’er             
She looked on, and her looks went everywhere.             
Sir, ’twas all one! My favor at her breast,                      25
The dropping of the daylight in the West,            
The bough of cherries some officious fool           
Broke in the orchard for her, the white mule     
She rode with round the terrace—all and each 
Would draw from her alike the approving speech,     30         
Or blush, at least. She thanked men,—good! but thanked
Somehow—I know not how—as if she ranked  
My gift of a nine-hundred-years-old name         
With anybody’s gift. Who’d stoop to blame        
This sort of trifling? Even had you skill             35
In speech—(which I have not)—to make your will           
Quite clear to such an one, and say, “Just this    
Or that in you disgusts me; here you miss,          
Or there exceed the mark”—and if she let          
Herself be lessoned so, nor plainly set           40
Her wits to yours, forsooth, and made excuse, 
—E’en then would be some stooping; and I choose        
Never to stoop. Oh sir, she smiled, no doubt,    
Whene’er I passed her; but who passed without             
Much the same smile? This grew; I gave commands;   45                       
Then all smiles stopped together. There she stands        
As if alive. Will’t please you rise? We’ll meet      
The company below, then. I repeat,      
The Count your master’s known munificence
Is ample warrant that no just pretense          50
Of mine for dowry will be disallowed;    
Though his fair daughter’s self, as I avowed        
At starting, is my object. Nay, we’ll go   
Together down, sir. Notice Neptune, though,   
Taming a sea-horse, thought a rarity,              55
Which Claus of Innsbruck cast in bronze for me!               


1.       List the specific words that are used to describe the Duchess and what this suggests about the relationship with the narrator.






2.       What does the Duke mean by “that piece” (line 3)


     
3.       What words indicate Frà Pandolf’s career?


4.       To whom is the Duke speaking?


5.       Reread the first 8 lines. Who else is speaking?



6.       To what is the Duke referring when he says ‘that pictured countenance” in line 7?



7.       Explain what the stranger “read[s]” in lines 6–7, “for never read / Strangers like you that pictured
countenance.” What might read mean here?





8.       What are some words that the Duke uses to describe the “glance” in line 8?



9.       Reread the poem independently



10.   This is a dramatic monologue. Drama means story; hence contains literary elements.
a.       Who are the characters in the poem?





b.      Write a summary of the plot?



























11.   Paraphrase the lines “Strangers like you always ask me, if they dare, how the Duchess came to look that way in the portrait.”






12.   Give two reasons that the the Duke might mention Frà Pandolf twice in the first six lines of the poem?






13.   In line 11, what do the words “if they durst” suggest about the Duke’s view of himself?



14.   What does the Duke imply when he uses the word “only” in line 14?



15.   What does the phrase “that spot of joy” suggest about the Duchess? What does the Duke imply in
lines 15–19 might have caused such an expression? 








16.   What does the Duke imply when he remarks that, “such stuff / Was courtesy she thought, and cause
enough / For calling up that spot of joy” (lines 19–21)? 












17.   Reread lines 21–22: “She had a heart—how shall I say?—too soon made glad / Too easily impressed…”
What is the effect of the repetition in these lines? Respond in a complete sentence.






18.   What does the Duke mean by “the dropping of daylight in the West” (line 26)?




19.   What does the Duke mean when he claims the Duchess’s “looks went everywhere”?
19.




20.   What does the Duke mean by the “gift of a nine-hundred years old name” (line 32)? And
20. From the Duke’s perspective, how does the Duchess value this gift?


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“My Last Duchess” by Robert Browning Due at the close of class on Thursday, November 9. Note that the marking period closes on Thursday, November 9. With the exception of those who receive extended time, no work will be accepted after this time. Those who receive extended time, will have the weekend to send the work along. There will be no additional class / computer time. You may, of course, work on your essay outside of class. Grades will be submitted over the weekend. New quarter begins on Monday, November 13.
Essay topic: How is the character of the Duke communicated in the dramatic monologue “My Last Duchess” by Robert Browning?
Think about the following: denotation vs connotation (what is said vs what is communicated); his diction (word choice / skill in speech); how power and control is conveyed; his seeming honesty; hints he gives; his authoritative tone (stooping); how he treats his audience

Mechanics: begin by jotting down and outline. How are you organizing your thoughts?  What is your thesis? (look to the question!) What points are you going to discuss?
                     minimum 5 paragraphs
                      minimum 400 words
                      typed
                      MLA heading
                       Weave in textual evidence / cite lines.  Remember that in your introduction, you will have a hook, a thought-provoking statement of a couple of sentences that will entice your reader into wanting to read your essay. (patriarchy / relationship men and women / consider the setting / time frame). Follow this with a clear thesis statement that will lay out what you will be expanding upon in the next three paragraphs. Read your question again; then think about what points you want to explore in detail. Don’t forget to introduce the Duke and his objective, including three aspects of his personality that are used to make this happen.
                      In each of your three body paragraphs, you will explore one of the topics from your introduction. There will be several supporting examples within each paragraph that are woven into your sentences. Do not forget that each paragraph must have an analysis statement that explains how or why the topic you are exploring is significant. Think about what specifically is the setting / situation where this is conveyed? How do other characters within the poem respond and how does the Duke react?

Conclusion: What may one take away from understanding the Duke’s character and the strategies he uses to attain his goal? Consider if his actions are unique. How are they reflected in the larger world, both in terms of personal relationships? Political and social issues? (Some

Grammar notes:
Transitions and conclusions: check the handout..VERY IMPORTANT!

No I, We, the reader…keep factual, objective, impersonal…you are presenting evidence to support your thesis and draw a conclusion.

No non-standard language—a “gonna” “wanna” b/ c  or & is an automatic C. These are always unacceptable in a formal essay.

Avoid contractions

Remember the difference: their / there / they’re- this last one will not be used, as it’s an abbreviation.

Check for capitalization, subject verb agreement, verb tense agreement, and, of course; for punctuation.  Comma and semi colon usage.

Have you sentence variety?

Citation information: After the first line in which you quote, write (Browning line (s) number; after the first time, you need only put the line (s) number at the end of the sentence. REMEMBER to use line breaks in you essay!

On a separate sheet, create a WORKS CITED, under which look up a copy of the poem and use citation machine to create a correctly. We use MLA format in ELA classes.

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 Transitional words
Agreement / Addition / Similarity
in the first place
not only ... but also
as a matter of fact
in like manner
in addition
coupled with
in the same fashion / way
first, second, third
in the light of
not to mention
to say nothing of
equally important
by the same token
again
to
and
also
then
equally
identically
uniquely
like
as
too
moreover
as well as
together with
of course
likewise
comparatively
correspondingly
similarly
furthermore
additionally
Opposition / Limitation / Contradiction
although this may be true
in contrast
different from
of course ..., but
on the other hand
on the contrary
at the same time
in spite of
even so / though
be that as it may
then again
above all
in reality
after all
If
... then
unless

when
whenever
while

because of
as
since
while
lest
in case
provided that
given that
only / even if
so that
so as to
owing to
inasmuch as
due to


in other words
to put it differently
for one thing
as an illustration
in this case
for this reason
to put it another way
that is to say
with attention to
by all means
important to realize
another key point
first thing to remember
most compelling evidence
must be remembered
surprisingly
frequently
significantly
point often overlooked
to point out
on the positive side
on the negative side
with this in mind
notably
including
like
to be sure
namely
chiefly
truly
indeed
certainly
surely
markedly
such as

in fact
in general
in particular
in detail
for example
for instance
to demonstrate
to emphasize
to repeat
to clarify
to explain
to enumerate
 especially
explicitly
specifically
expressly
particularly


Effect / Consequence / Result
as a result
under those circumstances
in that case
for this reason
in effect
for
thus
because the
then
hence
consequently
therefore
thereupon
forthwith
accordingly
henceforth
Conclusion / Summary / Restatement
as can be seen
generally speaking
in the final analysis
all things considered
as shown above
in the long run
given these points
as has been noted
in a word
for the most part
after all
in fact
in summary
in conclusion
in short
in brief
in essence
to summarize
on balance
altogether
overall
ordinarily
usually
by and large
to sum up
on the whole
in any event
in either case
all in all

Obviously
Ultimately
Definitely





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